Friday, 20 March 2015

Year 5 and 6 camp 2015 Recount

Walt  organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together.

Have you ever been on a amazing camp at school before? well I just had it last week, It was enjoyable. So that was the first camp I have ever been to, yep it’s the first camp I have ever been to. Well if you have not read my writing that I posted just go to my blog.

First Paragraph
If you do not know what the year 5 and 6 camp is well it is when you go to school and we do all kind of fun activities, like kayaking, cooking, top town but really it’s called killer zone, and there was also amazing race and again it was really called get lost. And do not forget you had to get into groups, I was in the group of the Mataponoe’ee, we also had to have two team leaders which was Machelle and Alfa.

1 Highlight
If I were to pick one of my favourite highlights it would be kayaking, this is the reason why I picked kayaking. Well it would be because my cousin was there for example for Mr Burt. So the other reason that I would pick kayaking was also because I got the chance to go on a boat with my team leader Machelle, and last but not least it was because I kept falling over and when I go up the kayak would always hit my head. And again it was my first time kayaking.

2 Highlight

So my second highlight of camp would be the day at Mangere pools. It is because I love swimming and because this is a pool that I have never ever been to. And there were three levels number It has a very deep pool that one of the year 5 girls drowned but she got saved by on of the lifeguard well lets just call them pool police. And there were two little pools at the bottom but it was not that deep, do not forget the slides, there were two of them. What do you think is your favourite pool, mine is the booming pool.


When we were coming back from the mangere pools in the bus I was feeling down because camp was almost over, although I was glad that sleeping on the hard ground was over. And I forgot to tell you this, did you know that the camp that we just had was the 25th year 5 and 6 camp. I hope the year four kids would like the camp next year.

Marked by Patricia

I learned how to organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together. Yep it is just like the at the top, If you do not know what Walt stands for well it stands for we are learning to, and that is what walt stands for.

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