Thursday, 22 October 2015

Our Virtual Trip To The Zoo

Plan of my paragraph topics

1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
Mr Goodwin told us all about going to visit the zoo. Well not to a zoo zoo I mean to a virtual zoo.
3. Body Paragraph 2
How amazed I was to see a gorilla video when I clicked the site.
4. Body Paragraph 3
I explored  the site and I was so amazed by all of the cute and fuzzy animals.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the San Diego Zoo
Room 6 literacy class is going on a virtual trip to the San Diego zoo. Yes that is right we are going on a virtual trip. If you would like to know more interesting facts about the animals, Just visit there site and tell me what you think about them.

My Recount Rubric
Recount Writing

Write for my reader
I've tried to think about my reader
My writing shows some awareness of reader because my writing is quite clear and I have tried to interest my reader.
My writing is easy to understand and I have tried to tell the reader what it was like to be there by giving details and my thoughts.
My writing really considers audience as reader because I have kept their interest and made them feel like they know exactly what it was like for me.
I tried to meet the purpose
My text goes some way towards meeting the purpose
The message is clear in some parts of the recount.
My text fully meets the purpose.
The message is clear all through the recount.
My introduction does not yet clearly orientate or hook in my reader.
My introduction gets some buy in from audience and they can understand what I am going to write about.
My introduction hooks in my reader and it is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction wows my reader!
Paragraph Topics
My paragraphs are confused and don't follow my plan.
I have tried to follow my plan.
Most my paragraphs are about 1 big idea and I have added some detail.
My paragraphs have some complex as well as simple sentences. Post paragraphs give details about 1 big idea.
I have followed the paragraph topic in my plan.
My paragraphs have complex and simple sentences. Paragraphs all give details about 1 big idea.

Description of learning:
I have been amazed by all the kind of interesting animals and my favourite was the gorillas. I have learnt so many facts from the virtual zoo. If you have any questions just comment below.

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